please!
i don't get enough advice or serious critique...
how do you guys expect me to get any better?


White NoiseThey tell me that if my heart were a battery, I'd light up LA They tell me this while their voices drop low They've already seen the showWhite Noise
Every time the production ends the same way I take all that love and glow I try to let it out slow
There's a short somewhere in my software it doesn't tell me when I've gone blind So all my tight coils unwind
I lost control of how much to care somewhere
All of a sudden it's high tide The lies hit me blind side
I'm drowning fast trying to collect all that I let go Suddenly it seems not worth
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"If i drink myself to death, at least i know ill have a good time"
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